Saturday, May 5, 2012

We Dance

Written for dVerse Poets Pub Poetics hosted by Stuart McPherson
Reposted for Anniversary Week at dVerse Poets Pub. This was the first poem I wrote for the Pub. Cheers!!


  1. "flesh pressed in rhythmic measure" ... Love the imagery and sound in this.

    "as low bass penetrates" ... Oh, I like this as well.

    "a crescendo is reached" ... Awesome. But the ending is my favorite:

    "hushed now
    we fade away"


  2. impressive...i remember this of the things i appreciate about you shawn is your how you creatively present your verse each week. also noticed you out and about a lot this week which was awesome...i appreciate that as well...might need to tap you on the shoulder to do a prompt sometime on artistically presenting your poems....just a thought...