After taking a three state trip and back again journey in 24 hours to see a music concert, I am not sure I have achieved what I was prompted to achieve... but I tried and I am tired. We had a great server this morning at The Sunny Street Cafe in Columbus OH.
Being in walking distance to a concert is the best...even if you have to spend the night. The Avett Brothers were amazing. Good Night.
Written for dVerse Poets Pub Poetics
You pour happiness-- such a lovely line. Taking orders of only sunlight too, and the flitting from stone to stone. Really nice. k.
ReplyDeletesmiles...sleep well... sounds like you had an awesome time...i love esp. the part of taking orders from sunlight...and having a server who loves his job does make a difference...
ReplyDeletesmiles....some really great touches in this...i like the clearing away the remnants to make way...and then pouring happiness and i imagine they tie together you know...glad you had fun at the concert...
ReplyDeleteI like it, Shawn. Full of light and hope, not to be deterred.
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This poem is a sunny reminder of that little cafe! Love it.
ReplyDeleteReally nice lovely coffee cafe smiley stuff.
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