tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4436840156832929812.post7789882488172786524..comments2022-11-06T03:37:10.678-05:00Comments on Beyond Innisfree: We DanceShawnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12089160847429622347noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4436840156832929812.post-71279632332723410592012-07-21T00:17:29.329-04:002012-07-21T00:17:29.329-04:00impressive...i remember this one...one of the thin...impressive...i remember this one...one of the things i appreciate about you shawn is your artistry...love how you creatively present your verse each week. also noticed you out and about a lot this week which was awesome...i appreciate that as well...might need to tap you on the shoulder to do a prompt sometime on artistically presenting your poems....just a thought...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4436840156832929812.post-79557789521255620322012-07-20T20:31:49.234-04:002012-07-20T20:31:49.234-04:00"flesh pressed in rhythmic measure" ... ..."flesh pressed in rhythmic measure" ... Love the imagery and sound in this.<br /><br />"as low bass penetrates" ... Oh, I like this as well.<br /><br />"a crescendo is reached" ... Awesome. But the ending is my favorite:<br /><br />"hushed now<br />we fade away"<br /><br />Beautiful.flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com