Tuesday, July 31, 2012

observed




Posted in delight for Chalk-A-Bration (my wonderful wife) and Open Link Night week 55 @ dVerse Poets Pub.

5 comments:

  1. ha...a delicate bitter...love th double play in that...i like the contrast and the implied emotions in this as well shawn...nice...

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  2. The mix of husband & wife is a challenge no matter who is who, is it not? And being together if possible brings out the loyalty as well as the competition. Interesting and thoughtful poem, Shawn.

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  3. Kinda yum...with a delicate bitter. ;) yeah. I like.

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  4. Hops, bitter, mix...all your words twinkle with wonderful color and a smooth finish. Love.

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  5. Ah...twinkling eyes and a delicate bitter. I wish.

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