ha...a delicate bitter...love th double play in that...i like the contrast and the implied emotions in this as well shawn...nice...
The mix of husband & wife is a challenge no matter who is who, is it not? And being together if possible brings out the loyalty as well as the competition. Interesting and thoughtful poem, Shawn.
Kinda yum...with a delicate bitter. ;) yeah. I like.
Hops, bitter, mix...all your words twinkle with wonderful color and a smooth finish. Love.
Ah...twinkling eyes and a delicate bitter. I wish.
ha...a delicate bitter...love th double play in that...i like the contrast and the implied emotions in this as well shawn...nice...
ReplyDeleteThe mix of husband & wife is a challenge no matter who is who, is it not? And being together if possible brings out the loyalty as well as the competition. Interesting and thoughtful poem, Shawn.
ReplyDeleteKinda yum...with a delicate bitter. ;) yeah. I like.
ReplyDeleteHops, bitter, mix...all your words twinkle with wonderful color and a smooth finish. Love.
ReplyDeleteAh...twinkling eyes and a delicate bitter. I wish.
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