Interesting montage of images.
I love it! Interesting style too
hehe...nice...great presentation of it...and my thoughts may tend to wander a bit the same antique shopping...love it...
I agree with Brian, great presentation, really moves the ideas along...
oh i just LOVE that....big smile....jazz and...everything...ha...nice
lovely... in every way.
Ooh these are the kind of poems I love. So dreamy and like an unspeakable vision or thought spread out in a song!Amy
Love how you did this! And I have to say I love antiques too. :)
yeahhh. can't go wrong with vinyl & nudity! nice write
Now I am imagining the stickiness of vinyl. The stickiness of mango. Sweet sticky mmmmm. I love this style, too...makes it feel somehow untethered...Nicely done!
This made me laugh! Two very different perspectives, eh?
Love the presentation of this poem, it reads perfectly. It sexy and fun! Nice to meet you and thanks for commenting on my piece.Pamela
Really nice to see your handwriting, makes it more personal. A great read too!
I still want that chair.
Oh, and the amount of time you spent figuring out how to position, photograph and crop this layout was worth it. Awesome!
Meanderings of thought and life in a rich textured way in fact so much so i can taste it
Love, love, LOVE the way you've presented this!
Love this. If only we could hear the hidden thoughts during the mundane everyday.
Your presentation is fab.It reminds me of collage poetry. Lovely.
sultry. the display totally appeals to me. Sweet.
the pieces and language of this really lend themselves to the layout you have put together... sultry and atmospheric. love it.
I really like the way you present your poetry. Quite nice! The visual creativity adds a great element to the reading. And I like this poem of glimpses into the thoughts behind a shared experience.
I love this Shawn...your poems make the best art!!!!!
You cast a sensual spell with this.