Sunday, July 15, 2012

Art Deco

Shared on dVerse~Poets Pub at Open Link Night

25 comments:

  1. I love it! Interesting style too

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  2. hehe...nice...great presentation of it...and my thoughts may tend to wander a bit the same antique shopping...love it...

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  3. I agree with Brian, great presentation, really moves the ideas along...

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  4. oh i just LOVE that....big smile....jazz and...everything...ha...nice

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  5. Ooh these are the kind of poems I love. So dreamy and like an unspeakable vision or thought spread out in a song!
    Amy

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  6. Love how you did this! And I have to say I love antiques too. :)

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  7. yeahhh. can't go wrong with vinyl & nudity! nice write

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  8. Now I am imagining the stickiness of vinyl. The stickiness of mango. Sweet sticky mmmmm.
    I love this style, too...makes it feel somehow untethered...
    Nicely done!

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  9. This made me laugh! Two very different perspectives, eh?

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  10. Love the presentation of this poem, it reads perfectly. It sexy and fun! Nice to meet you and thanks for commenting on my piece.

    Pamela

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  11. Really nice to see your handwriting, makes it more personal. A great read too!

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    1. Oh, and the amount of time you spent figuring out how to position, photograph and crop this layout was worth it. Awesome!

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  13. Meanderings of thought and life in a rich textured way in fact so much so i can taste it

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  14. Love, love, LOVE the way you've presented this!

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  15. Love this. If only we could hear the hidden thoughts during the mundane everyday.

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  16. Your presentation is fab.It reminds me of collage poetry. Lovely.

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  17. sultry. the display totally appeals to me. Sweet.

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  18. the pieces and language of this really lend themselves to the layout you have put together... sultry and atmospheric. love it.

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  19. I really like the way you present your poetry. Quite nice! The visual creativity adds a great element to the reading. And I like this poem of glimpses into the thoughts behind a shared experience.

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  20. I love this Shawn...your poems make the best art!!!!!

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  21. You cast a sensual spell with this.

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