Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Standing Alone

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~ Poets Pub

OpenLinkNight ~ Week 48

 

 

12 comments:

  1. Some wonderful images in here.

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  2. nice...i really like the textures you were able to get in this shawn...and i always make something of nothing...smiles...

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  3. I went my own way with this one--probably not where you intend for the readers to go--and smelled a certain smoke in the air. A haze ever filled with ideas and lofty plans. A vivid write, Shawn. Nicely done!

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  4. I could feel the granules of sand crunch beneath my feet. Well done, Shawn.

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  5. This is a perfect little portrait poem... I love the impressions that immediately came to mind. Nice note on the ending as well.

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  6. Brilliant move adding the voice, as it gives added feeling to words I might've otherwise passed by. A great read and write.

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  7. I like, especially being able to read and listen at the same time. Love the line with the sand and G aliteration. Very strong.

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  8. dig the aesthetics all around...shared it

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  9. ideas born out of nothing...those are the ones that grow and grow and grow...nicely penned shawn

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  10. Hiya, Those waves of glee appealed to me. In fact the entire scene was fresh and novel, and I could see myself standing in the huge garage we had when we lived in upstate new york.Couldn't quite understand the bake in sadness phrase. Nice to hear you read it.

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  11. Sad about the sadness, but a great capture of a very singular moment.

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