impressive...i remember this one...one of the things i appreciate about you shawn is your artistry...love how you creatively present your verse each week. also noticed you out and about a lot this week which was awesome...i appreciate that as well...might need to tap you on the shoulder to do a prompt sometime on artistically presenting your poems....just a thought...
"flesh pressed in rhythmic measure" ... Love the imagery and sound in this.
ReplyDelete"as low bass penetrates" ... Oh, I like this as well.
"a crescendo is reached" ... Awesome. But the ending is my favorite:
"hushed now
we fade away"
Beautiful.
impressive...i remember this one...one of the things i appreciate about you shawn is your artistry...love how you creatively present your verse each week. also noticed you out and about a lot this week which was awesome...i appreciate that as well...might need to tap you on the shoulder to do a prompt sometime on artistically presenting your poems....just a thought...
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